scenes documented!!
now to the index cards
3/5ths through jotting down these Daugment scenes so I can figure out what’s gettin’ cut and what’s missing and what’s in the wrong place. this is the part that I put off for a very long time because I fear its exhausting depths, but when the time finally comes I become very still inside and just get through it
I’m diving back into Daugment and therefore looking up pictures of beagle-bassets and holy shit I picked like the least dignified dog in the world I’m so proud of myself
THUNDER
from Daugment:
“The evil showed no face!” Isaias thundered, making them all jump, even Fionn. “The evil showed no benevolence. It destroyed everything it could see…”
got Daugment notes back! quite pleased. he caught lots of inconsistencies and weird style things.
and I love that it sounds like it came out of one of those random concept generators
“This story about unlikely friendship involves a brilliant general and a talking dog.”
HA! Daugment notes complete! sending it with signed contract and deposit tomorrow!